Tuesday, January 08, 2013

My Blunt Existence

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The rhythm of my hand goes well with the drops of ink and with words floating in my brain. I do not have highfalutin words to speak of, instead, the way of my emotions and the labyrinth that my soul’s going through are the ones obliging me to put the significance of other’s life into scriptures. But, ironically, I do not find my life as important as others do consider it. The poetry of contrast the world has offered me evoked my sensations to be involved in its abyss. In there I grew, letting my entirety to be succumbed in angst, chaos, obscurity and insanity. I tried to reach and comprehend what others have to say. But then, when I speak mine, no one dared to listen. So I merely buried myself to the grounds, lips closed, with tranquility by my side.

I let my soul be caged, bleeding with verses of blunt poems. The eternal one brought me to my fallen state, my solitary freedom, where there is only darkness and no recline. He was the one who sent and made me street poet, with holes in my jacket, stones in my shoes and stains of remorse in my spirit. The irony of life, my illusions, false hopes, after thoughts, daydreams, agonies, memories made me a prison of words. And this unspoken prose is my destiny. Though I’ve been rejected repeatedly, sonnets make me the wholeness of my life and makes me hush all these words…… letting my spirit rise again…… to another life yet unlived.

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  1. "The irony of life, my illusions, false hopes, after thoughts, daydreams, agonies, memories made me a prison of words" - I like this one. I like the whole post too. Short yet profound. Have a goood day Lawrence!

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  2. cheer up dude...
    I am sure 2013 is better for you...

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  3. i like this post...

    i love the emotion... pero kaka-sad...

    don't tell your life is not as important as what others consider it...

    aside from good poems, try to share your actual life experiences and you might find an audience and touch lives too...

    i feel you...

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  4. such a deep post my friend,
    saddening at mysterious

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    1. it feels like your goign through something,
      what ever it is just hold on with your faith in god
      because with just by that everything will be better

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    2. cheer up dude 2013 is a nother year to do it right leave all behind and start living a year filled with positivity

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    3. beside there so much in life to be thankful for

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  5. Wow, it's so deep to fathom the world where you exists as of the moment. But what I appreciate about your post is the careful selection of words that best fit to your current norms. whatever you're going through there is the Divine to guide you through. People may reject you but He will never do.

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  6. Do not speak less of yourself because you are a beautiful creation of God. The world may forsake you, but what the heck! He is there waiting for you to reach out. Just speak freely to him with all your heart and He will understand you.He may answer in delay but there are reasons why He does it sometimes. Just have faith. And yes, there is so much to be thankful for. Life is beautiful to a human being who sees it as such. Cheers bro!

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  7. Fall seven times, stand up eight.

    Cheers for a positive and happy 2013!

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  8. U will be ok soon. We're here to listen. Cheer up Lawrence :)

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  9. That's the spirit, you fall, you rise again :) Go lang ng go Lawrence! :)

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  10. Rejections are certainly hard to deal with, but we can surely overcome it!

    Tomorrow never ends! Fight!

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  11. that is too deep lawrence. hehehe whatever it is, dont let this emotions eat you. life has to start all over again after our unexpected circumstances. we need to grow and learn anyway.

    napapaenglish tuloy ako sayo! hahaha mapressure ako sa blog mo! hahaha

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  12. I love blunt poetry. Maybe because it's the only time I know how to write. ;)

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